THE ILL
You may have noticed the deviation entitled 'The Ill'. This is an ongoing story of which in the ened you could say a novel. At this moment i have written the extreme start to the first chapter of which is setting the scene to a fantasy world. I won't say anymore about the plot because i don't want to reveal any of the plot. I am in a stage of planning where that first installment and the comments and feedback received have aided me to begin planning the story chapter by chapter. Don't you worry, planning will be over soon and writing will commence, also the plans will not be in great detail, most just a half page to a page of notes per chapter leaving a lot upto my imagination. I would put the plans on DA once i'd finished but that again would ruin the plot.

Grammer can always be a problem in my writing for i just like to write about the images in my head and so telling me where gramitical and spelling errors are would be a huge help. Also if you think words should be taken out or to re-structure parts feel free.

The chapters will all be uploaded in, say, small extracts which means it is easy to tell me how i could improve. Links will be able to be found in the description to the next and previous pages to aid readability.

I am asking you i suppose to be my readers as i write. I will easily be able to get people to read it as a whole story but what is harder to find is unbiased people to offer corrections ang help as the story progresses and tell me if i have gone off track.

The Ill Status
Currently in planning

to read the starting text of 'The Ill'

click the thumb...


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Deviation progress and dates

Monday: Nothing
Tuesday: ditto
Wed: I hopefuly will have put up one deviation at this point but nothing set on stone
Thur: i don't plan that far a head
Fri:new journal

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mood:happy
listening to:Taking Back Sunday - Spin

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Deviation progress and dates

Monday: Nothing
Tuesday: ditto
Wed: I hopefuly will have put up one deviation at this point but nothing set on stone
Thur: i don't plan that far a head
Fri:new journal

The ill:next installment hopefuly tomorrow currently writing and editing at the moment.

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Mood-Happy
listeneing to - nothing

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Hey guys, i'm back xD
After a long time of not being around i am finaly here and hopefuly here to stay!
I have been gone for quite a long time now and you would have thought i would have written a lot of other things but the truth is i have done absolutely nothing.

I have a few deviations which should be coming up in the next few weeks and one i am very happy about but won't be put up until i get it back from my English teacher - stupid English assignments...

Mood:Bored

Well this is the first time in about a month that i have managed to access deviant art since my computer was taken away to be fixed and it still won't work so i don't know when i will be back online. I'll try every IT lesson possible which is 2 a fortnight on the same week . Anywho


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Bow down to the Greenday Masters!!!!!!

Well as lots of people know, Greenday have released something really great and it is named Bullet in a Bible. This CD and DVD is briliant. All footage taken from the Milton Keynes National Bowel, England. Go Milton Keynes, we rock, hehe. Well this DVD is a sort of Documentury about Greenday made by themselves (well they didnt go around with the cameras). Anyway, this shows lotsa about greenday and also the CD is brilliant, i love to hear live songs and especially if they were being recorded live where i live xD. Anyway this is a brilliant buy, if you live in England and want to buy it, buy from Virgin Megastores, it is cheaper and you''l get a stamp on your Virgin Adict card.




IF YOU READ THIS THEN PLEASE CLICK ON THE FEATURED DEVIANTS BEFORE I EAT YOU!

Countdowns!!!!!!!!

18 days till Woooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
31 days till MY BIRTHDAY xD


Tom's spiffy advent calender

Underneath are lots of numbers, 24 to be exact. Well these numbers represent the different days of december. This is my advent calender, click on the links, (numbers) On the day, so when it is the 1st of December click the 1 and when it is the 18th click the 18. These links will transport you to a deviants piece of work I will be adding Christmas Day as day (25) however this will be at a later date through december, also not all numbers have a link as of et, only a few do at this moment. There are enough for a 7 day week. It isn;t really a christmas themed advent calender however hopefully on Christmas Eve and Christmas Day i'll have festive ones.

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News

Well i'm currently writing a short novel, which will take me aaaaages, so my deviation submitions will be even more spread out than they currently are. If i feel like it, when i have completed parts of the novel i will submit extracts but as of yet i have recorded 2 lines. This story if we must call it that, will be set in the time of the might of the Great British Empire and it will be a story of the oppressive behaviour and it will be set in Africa. Well as of this moment i do not know any more but that i will try to make it as historically and geographically accurate as i can while still using poetic liscence

What do i aspire to do this week?


upload at least 3 deviations click for gallery
Watch Harry Potter And the Goblet of Fire click me Seen! woop!
put up at least 5 more faves of other peoples work
Change my avatar. DONE xD

My joke of the week
This week it is taken from an episode of the Vicar of Dibley (the best TV show ever xD)

There are three women, two are nuns and the other is a priest. They all die at the same time and go to heaven. God is standing behind the gate saying "you can only come in if you answer a question right!"
The first nun walks upto the gate and says, " whats my question?"
God says, "what was the name of the first woman?"
Nun:Eve
God:Welldone
second nun comes to the gate
God:Where did Eve live?
second nun: the garden of Eden
God: correct
the priest walks to the gate
God: this has to be a bit harder for you because you're a priest.
priest: ok
God:what was the first thing Eve said when she saw Adam?
Priest: urrrr... thats a hard one.
God: correct you're in


My Faves this week
Fave film this week: Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire
Fave song this week: ermm... any MCR or Bullet for my valentine track
Fave food this week: i could kill for a Zinger Tower Meal from KFC, teh sex in a bun, or the treacle tart at my school which i made the mistake of saying on Monday, "its like sex in a tart" which sounded like "sexing a tart.

Who is the best, better than all the rest?

zotanium is... xD

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